sudden breeze
water lilies
hold the pond still

—Sue Mill

About the author: Sue Mill, suemill at hotmail dot com
Brisbane, Australia

I have been writing haiku for about six years. I belong to one haiku group here in Brisbane and am involved with the newly-formed Australian Haiku Society (HaikuOz for short) as Publications Officer. Here is the HaikuOz Web site.

Responses to the haiku for 10 January 2001 by Sue Mill

    Zhanna P. Rader
    2003-03-07 03:00:14

    I like your haiku, Sue. Zhanna

    2003-03-07 18:12:26

    The wonder of haiku. Here is a scene I must have witnessed dozens of times, yet never took the moment. And now through reading these lines, I can experience it more fully than when the scene actually played out before my eyes.
    What's more, I will witness this scene again in the future, and my experience will be enriched by this haiku.
    Thank you Sue.

    2003-03-19 20:30:31

    A wonderful haiku full of the moment. Thank you, Sue.

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-20 21:03:23

    so very cold, winter winds
    fallen leaves -
    blanket the ground

    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-05 02:28:29

    after stored away
    for the winter months
    earth bursts forth with new strength

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-03 20:13:31

    brisk spring breeze
    trees waving --
    half completed jog