The landscape is halved
    fog slumps across the valley
 carrying the night

—Audaye Elesedy

About the author: audaye elesedy, a-elesedy at tinyworld dot co dot uk


Responses to the haiku for 2 March 2001 by Audaye Elesedy

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-19 00:49:56

    tinsels ...
    cool autumn morn
    green fronds reflecting sunlight

    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-23 05:52:16

    impending storm
    the clouds
    hide the stars and moon

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-08 18:59:24

    today's burden
    weights upon my shoulders ...
    i slump across the bed