Cold white flakes settle -
soft white wool.
I see no sheep.


—Phil France

It snowed here today (the first day of spring as it happens)! All the sheep on the hills vanished, inspiring haiku.

Here's a followup haiku by Phil:

Soon, though, they move,
to find food.
They are negative sheep. . . .

About the author: Phil France, philip.france at virgin dot net

3 responses
published 29 March 2001
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Responses to the haiku for 29 March 2001 by Phil France

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-24 05:40:40
     

    it's snowing!
    i return from the window
    soggy cereal, greeting

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 08:25:38
     

    through the dawn mist
    the waving leaves
    of my favourite palm tree

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-11 16:22:32
     

    cool breeze rising -
    frosty breath in may,
    somewhere

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