The same orbit -
  butterflies during the day
  and bats at night


—Jadran Zalokar

About the author: Jadran Zalokar is the President of the Haiku Society of Rijeka.

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Responses to the haiku for 7 June 2002 by Jadran Zalokar

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-15 14:24:28
     

    the stars midday
    the magicians ...
    their disappearing act

  2.  
    Asja Magas
    2003-10-23 08:41:02
     

    Draga Asja,
    saljem Ti jedan odabrani haiku
    pusa
    Jadran

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-29 17:34:16
     

    today
    as the day before --
    it's to rain

    -

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-13 21:51:41
     

    Light of lampstreet -
    shadows of night butterflies
    frisking on the side-walk

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-05 16:13:16
     

    same world
    wildflowers in season
    as the farmer tills the earth

    -

    wind-borne seeds
    sparrow's feast

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