puff of exhaust
hangs
in the empty intersection


—Bill Waters

About the author: Bill Waters
Titusville, NJ
bnwaters at verizon.net

5 responses
published 3 January 2003
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Responses to the haiku for 3 January 2003 by Bill Waters

  1.  
    Norman Darlington
    2003-03-07 17:26:26
     

    Magic moment. Exquisitely sharp picture called up by perfectly chosen vocabulary.
    'Puff' and 'hangs'...I can smell it right now!

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-23 21:47:17
     

    distant intersection
    the light changes to red ...
    a car backfires

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-06-06 08:13:51
     

    first thing in
    chinese new year
    breaking the firecrackers law

  4.  
    martin
    2004-06-30 08:55:08
     

    truck's exhaust
    the wind clears the intersection

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-29 02:55:36
     

    morning jog
    chillingly still
    mouse by the side of the road

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