4:30PM -
frost, still,
on the pavement.

—Jon Summers

About the author: Jon Summers lives in South Wales, and has had haiku published in a variety of magazines including Blithe Spirit, Presence and Fire. He lives with his wife, a rapidly growing son, and an ever-shrinking amount of time to actually get any writing done!

email: SummersJ at logica.com

Responses to the haiku for 17 January 2003 by Jon Summers

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-24 18:01:04

    midnight -
    homeless man
    still beneath the bridge

    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-03 10:46:10

    past two a.m.
    still trying to get
    into dreamland

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-30 16:25:09

    7:13 post meridiem ...
    heaviness in the air


    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-21 00:58:51

    Fresh traces -
    the wedding travel of
    the vagrant dogs

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-31 10:04:47

    dreary afternoon
    beneath grey cloud
    my shadow forgotten, somewhere