in the cold mirror:
lined face
above an old sweater

—Patricia Kelly

About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.

Responses to the haiku for 24 January 2003 by Patricia Kelly

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-24 18:58:04

    youthful remembrance:
    the winkles
    speak of the years

    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-03 10:29:24

    those lines
    on the face

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-30 17:32:31

    fogged mirror:
    a silhouette
    of my former self

    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-06-12 22:32:05

    In the cold window
    a child waiting to blossom
    the red geranium

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-31 15:41:09

    languid grey-day
    from the leaf, two raindrops fell
    raining, i didn't know