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Responses to the haiku for 21 November 2006 by Susan Sonnen

1.  
   Alan Summers
   2006-11-21 09:28:34
    

   Very moving.

2.  
   Dirk van Nouhuys (DHvN at wandd dot com)
   2006-11-21 13:27:21
    

   Sharp!

3.  
   ynes
   2006-11-21 14:15:47
    

   oh yes susan ...the community of shirt huggers ....
   
   your old t shirt
   just smells
   of washing powder

4.  
   sharon weimer
   2006-11-21 14:50:20
    

   Beautiful haiku, but sad. I am sorry for your heartache.

5.  
   Ross Clark
   2006-11-21 20:31:33
    

   my old shirt
   so comfortably resting
   on your young breasts
   
   (from my chapbook)

6.  
   Magyar
   2006-11-22 06:11:37
    

   Susan,
   _I scold myself for my "too many comments on t/w," but I can't overlook your jewel!
   _Reading your words is -sensing- and by sensing them, how could anyone -not feel-?
   Heartfull !
   tnx -M

7.  
   Darrell Lindsey (writerd at hotmail dot com)
   2006-11-22 13:37:50
    

   Nice work.Memorable.

8.  
   Ross Clark
   2006-11-23 20:59:53
    

   waking up:
   within my arms
   your heartbeat
   
   (another from my chapbook)
   (thank you for your tiny words)

9.  
   Judith Ingram (super dot ingram at verizon dot net)
   2006-11-23 22:04:14
    

   susan, your poem holds my heart.
   
   
   your old sweater
   wraps around me
   without your arms

10.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-11-24 04:23:34
     

    your side of the bed-
    chilling winds
    through the pines

11.  
    Terra Martin
    2006-12-31 13:38:17
     

    Shivers everywhere!

12.  
    Judy Giles
    2007-02-02 00:04:19
     

    Susan, your words are words that prove that we don't need many words.

13.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-12-04 05:42:22
     

    rainy autumn morn
    blackbirds line the wire--
    where sun shined days before