moonshadows
a rabbit emerges
from the snowman's top hat
—Ed Markowski
previously published in the haiku ireland newsletter
About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.
Beautiful Ed!
You've created the 'magic' of the moment just out of thin air!!!
Impressive truly!
- kala
Bill Kenney
2007-01-03 07:01:14
double take:
the snowperson
has breasts
Very good, Ed.
Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
2007-01-03 09:56:05
pure magic!
judith ingram
2007-01-03 21:18:42
I doff my top hat to you, Ed. I laughed out loud and there are few things more wonderful than laughter. Did you know there are groups who get together on a regular basis for the sole purpose of laughter? appy noo yeer!
b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
2007-01-04 10:53:09
winter's brisk breeze
underside of leaves exposed
...and her pale scalp
yeah!
i like this haiku very much!
Beautiful Ed!
You've created the 'magic' of the moment just out of thin air!!!
Impressive truly!
- kala
double take:
the snowperson
has breasts
Very good, Ed.
pure magic!
I doff my top hat to you, Ed. I laughed out loud and there are few things more wonderful than laughter. Did you know there are groups who get together on a regular basis for the sole purpose of laughter? appy noo yeer!
winter's brisk breeze
underside of leaves exposed
...and her pale scalp
lunar magic
in the snow
& funny too!
This one is a real charmer --- thanks!
A magical moment, Ed...
happy New Year!
:-)
Lary