couple in the pub
they both strip off
the beer labels
—Rafal Zabratynski
About the author: I live in Rzeszow, Poland, where I enjoy teaching teenagers English. My poems have been published in Haiku Harvest and Asahi Haikuist Network, and I am a member of the AHA Poetry Forums. Writing haiku is one of my favourite ways of admiring the world. My website is: http://www.raaav.xt.pl/.
My e-mail address is: raaav at wp dot pl
Great! I see this so often, that it's nice to have it captured in a haiku. Thank you!
_I've seen that Rafal!
_ A Kuku Ku response.
four "Lites"
green light, yellow light, red.
blue light... ooops_!
"Mommy and Daddy
how did you two meet again?"
"Well kids it's like this...."
spice cologne
a buzzed barfly drones
on and on
your senryu hits home. we need all the haiku
and senryu we can get on bar and booze
cultchur! dedicate em all to chuck bukowski!
Good observation, Rafal.
old married couple
they snap their fortune cookies
at the same moment
Rafal,
Great haiku. Isn't peeling a beer label supposed to be an indication of a certain kind of frustration? :)
Perfect.
Collin
Dear Haiku Friends,
Thank you for all your generous comments on my first haiku here.
I'm glad it rings a bell with you.
Regards,
RaV
couple in the park
against the aged maple--
initials coupled