Overcast summer morning
the tulips
open with the sky

—Felica Sah

About the author: I reside in Portland Oregon and have been writing haiku for over 10 years. I am inspired by the nonstop rain here and the roar of the ocean just a short drive away.

9 responses
published 17 July 2007
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Responses to the haiku for 17 July 2007 by Felica Sah

  1.  
    Derek Schroder
    2007-07-17 08:14:24
     

    Beautiful. a great way to capture the unexpected beauty of a new morning.

    -DS

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-07-17 11:56:24
     

    And not only the tulips!

    Your haiku makes me remind myself what a simple luxury a morning summer sky can be, regardless of overcast it is.

  3.  
    Louise (coach_louise at yahoo dot com)
    2007-07-17 13:15:44
     

    Lovely, Felica. I live north of you and it is raining--more drops for the flowers.

  4.  
    Sari Grandstaff
    2007-07-17 13:47:07
     

    Beautiful haiku and really reminds me of the rewards I receive when I take the time to observe.

  5.  
    Jan Blueback
    2007-07-17 15:37:39
     

    It is all about the tiny beauties that remind us how intricately remarkable this grand world is. Fantastic.
    - Jan B.

  6.  
    Kujtim
    2007-07-17 16:39:40
     

    Thank you! It is a beautiful haiku, Filled with too more images and fantasy.

  7.  
    Magyar
    2007-07-18 06:48:48
     

    turbins
    open in the colder skies
    warming
    -M

  8.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-07-27 18:14:27
     

    my neighbor's grief
    akin to laughter
    a warm tear forms

  9.  
    ed markowski
    2007-08-09 16:27:41
     

    felicia,
    i truly appreciate the comments you afforded
    my poem today.
    ed markowski

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