heat wave!
the chapel in the snow
screensaver
—Patricia Kelly
About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.
Nicely constructed. Line 3 has a real pop.
Thanks! It was fun to write ... after choosing that "cool" screensaver image ... in a heat wave ... :-)
A favourite of mine, and I just can't resist a haiku with snow in it! ;-)
Nicely observed! Excellent contrast between images.
~Megan
winter moon...
the palm trees sway
on my mouse pad
heat shimmer
a surfer's silhouette
on the paper cup
heat wave
chill from the downed draft
crossroad pub
Love those haiku responses. Thanks!