heat wave!
the chapel in the snow

—Patricia Kelly

About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.


Responses to the haiku for 21 August 2007 by Patricia Kelly

    Bill Kenney
    2007-08-21 08:16:25

    Nicely constructed. Line 3 has a real pop.

    2007-08-21 11:57:29

    Thanks! It was fun to write ... after choosing that "cool" screensaver image ... in a heat wave ... :-)

    2007-08-21 12:12:29

    A favourite of mine, and I just can't resist a haiku with snow in it! ;-)

    Megan (markenberg at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-21 15:01:47

    Nicely observed! Excellent contrast between images.


    winter moon...
    the palm trees sway
    on my mouse pad

    Josh Wikoff
    2007-08-21 19:56:29

    heat shimmer
    a surfer's silhouette
    on the paper cup

    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-22 00:27:05

    heat wave
    chill from the downed draft
    crossroad pub

    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) (maryschild44 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-22 11:35:57

    Love those haiku responses. Thanks!